The beat is really good, and the rap flows pretty smoothly, but the two don't seem to go as well together as some of your other work. I thought the beginning and middle lyrics were the strongest, but once again not as good as your other work. Still very good.
I'm amazed how well this melody and beat go with the vocals. Although it's not mainstream I can certainly see this sound being popularized.
I absolutely love the combination of this beat with the synths. I've always been a sucker for simplicity being used correctly. It's cut and dry, and not muddied up. I think a little more bass would have gone a long way, but then again that might have taken away from the charm.
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